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MaxB - Access To The Timeportal (även en Karaoke-video)
Eddi:
Bättre volym på pianot nu men ibland låter det som om pianisten inte riktigt vet vad som ska komma så det blir nåt felsteg vid några övergångar. Jag antar att du skiftat Em Am vid 145 och 209 men sången har inte gjort det så det låter lite konstigt.
För Julis del lägger jag in google translate på en gång.
For Julis part do I add google translate at once.
Better volume on the piano now, but sometimes it sounds as if the pianist does not really know what to get, so it becomes something misstep at some crossings. I guess you changed Em Am at 145 and 209 but the song did not make it so it sounds a little weird.
Very nice choir parts.
MaxB:
yah, I might ask Matteman who also is a keyboardist to to the pianoplaying in this track, later on, but for now I do the playing to find more ideas. That's right, you reckoned where the chords are changed and yes the songmelody should change as well as the choir (that I muted here). And I still want something more that will change the mood in the track somewhere.
Still thinking about what you and Matteman did with the piano at your home recently; You said C# at a stage and Matteman followed with an even more weird chord. That might fit somewhere...
Jocke:
Nice! :)
egghuvud:
Hmmm hamnade verkligen i bryderi när jag lyssnade på detta. Jag gillar verkligen harmonierna och låten, men jag kommer inte alls överens med arrangemanget och instrumenteringen. Tycker att orgelljudet är coolt men det blir alldeles för mycket toner så att man nästan tappar bort sångmelodin. Trummorna är lite oinsiprerade och ljudet är trist. Sången känns lite country och det krockar med själva kompet på något sätt. Själv skulle jag nog arrat det lite mer country med gitarr, orgeln längre bak och kanske dubbal tempot. FAst samtidigt så förlorar man ju den där känslan av lofi som ändå är sådär tilltalande på något sätt. Svårt. Trummorna behöver iallfall fixas till i mina öron.
In english
Hmmm actually ended up in a bit baffeld when I listened to this. I really like the harmonies and the song, but im having problems with the arrangement and instrumentation. I think the organ sound is coo ,but it plays so many notes that you almost lose the vocal melody. The drums are a bit uninspired and the sound is a bit dull. The song feels a little country and the clashes with the music. I would probably arrange it a little more country music with guitar, the organ further back and maybe dubble the pace. At the same time, you lose that feeling of lofi which is still appealing some how. Difficult. The drums needs to be fixed in my ears. Great vocals as usual.
eggs
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equality:
Nice to "see" you here again Julianna and great joy to hear your magnificent voice. Lovely melody and harmonies which give me some vibes of Dylan's I shall be released. Like the arragement, perhaps the Wurlitzer should be more restrained since it take some focus from the vocal. Improvised parts could be spared to a solo part. Nevertheless nice co-lab and a great song. Congrats!
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