I like the meditative feeling in the track and the mix is in my ear (headphones) damn good.
One thing I do not like (but guess I'm alone on this one) is all compression on the voice.
I do not hear when there is power in the voice och when there is a whisper. There are no difference I think. But, maybe it's me that have to think different.
Anyway with this compression - lower the inhale-volume to a realistic volume in comparison.
Nice meditation over all!
And Bacon, are you open for suggestions on other tracks from other members on KR?
Your voice should be heard more!
Thnx Maxb! glad you liked the song. The compression is a problem. I love overly compressed vocals in a sence. It exaggerates some of the most basic elements: inahle/exhale, attitude, and small but important sounds that convey lots and lots of information. The downside is obvious: It doesnt sound natural. But I sort of mixed this one with a thought in my head:
The song is about being alone in a crowd, invisible. Or alone in a relation to someone else. I wanted the vocals to be heard like the listener hears itself whispering. That the whole song experience is lived from within.
My idea was then too use automation to get rid of some of the more harsh (um, how do you spell that?) sounds: t, h and so on, and just lowering the breathing sounds.
Perhaps its useless though, but Ill give it a shot.
Lyssnar på tvåan.
Obligatorisk pseudointellektuellt citat, utanför kontexten av diskussionen:
"A man whose mind has gone astray should study mathematics" /Bacon, fysikern. Citatet innehåller referenser till både låtens titel, och Bacon McFlurry och flera andra saker som har med detta att göra (om man letar) 
Allt för att dölja att jag inte vet vad jag skall skriva
Jomen, det är en schysst jädra pianolåt. Snyggt sjunget!
Mupptrixa ihop en jedra skiva nu (men kanske inte just den här som första spår! Vet inte varför men jag vet ju hur ni gillar att låta vanligtvis). Den funkar dock bra som 5e 
Får återkomma, efter nedtankning, för nåt fel på spelaren här efter 1 minut eller vad det var?. Fin fin fin potential på denna!
Thnx divi! yeah, the idea is a song in between other songs. perhaps number five is perfect? Glad you liked it! Strange thing with the player, perhaps it will sort itself out after the next version. I had the same sort of issues from our server yesterday. I had to refresh to be able to hear more than 40 seconds!
Thanks for feedback!
Tänker vara lite Tom-tvärtom här. Låten är ok men jämfört med de andra som Chrome har producerat, känns det mer som ett mellanspår. Inget fel på något men den når inte ända fram helt enkelt.
Kanske den €&@&& snön som drar ner mottagligheten.
Das schnee ist weiss. And cold, and also, it has overstayed its welcome this year?

Ok, you cant please them all, and I agreee with you that its not our front line number I guess. But, the intention is to have it as a unwinder, to calm things down. Perhaps we have to see how it fits in the context.
Thanks for being honest!
Har lyssnat på verre 2 och det som genast slår en är ju Kate Bush i Bacons röst - väldigt bra. Hade lite problem med tågstationen i början och hör också omtagningen lite tydligt. Valgitarrerna och pianot är trevliga guider i låten synten mystifierar lite.
Det blir lite hårda T och H-ljud på vissa ställen i sången om det bberor på komprimeringen eller inte vet jag inte men det stör lite. Efter 140 går låten på tomgång men jag antar att den är under utveckling.
Swenglish translation in short:
Remembers of Kate Bush nice, some hard T- and H-sounds. Like the Whalesounds - think the song needs developement after 140 on the KR-player - prosume thats according to plan.
Hello! Weve already been through the vox compression above here, but thanks for pointing it out!
I dont know if it wil be such a tremendous development after 140 seconds though. This is intended as a monotone piece. Perhaps it gets too boring, and if thats the case in context on the album, something will be done, but for now on, there are only smaller changes actually.
thanks for your thoughts!
Ok i will try some english, though usually when i talk english i discuss software architecture, meaning that i don't know all phrases when it comes to music. 
I really like this song, maybe it's not very direct but it grows. I'm amazed by the singing vocals that goes very well with the rest of the arrangement. Maybe there are some strong ess's, t's and breathing that could have been avoided but at the same time it can be seen as part of the feeling, yes the feeling that is very strong
. I usually encourage people that sings on my songs to sing little from the side past the mic to get rid of most of the air. But i'm not sure if it is not Emulator that uses little to much compression on the vocals that strenghten the ess's even more.
Very much on just a detail... As i said, it's very good and i've listen several times on it. I want to here more collaborations from you.
BR Staffan
vox again. I hear you all

but Im stubbron that i will succed in conveying the basic idea I had

Well, I guess you all are right, but anyhow, I will first test my theories.
Im glad you enjoyed the song! thnx!
<Bacon Speak> Emu, you're hilarious! 
Hello, Boys! Thank you all for making such fine comments. I happen to agree with all of you, especially the T & S thing. After listening several times, I think they are a bit too compressed as well (sorry, Emu!).
Freddy, you are right about everything you said... MaxB, I have worked with several people on KR already, and am open to more - but I have to tell you that Emu is keeping me pretty busy! You might have to get in line....
Clavinova, I think Emu has some more things to add so hopefully it will all come together for you in the end.... Thanks, Divi & Eko! Stajo - I sing a little to the side, use a pop filter and watch how I pronounce things. I don't think the track I sent had such strong sounds on it. So, I'll blame Emu, too. 
Tack you all for listening!
<Bacon speak>
the compr...bla bla bal whatever

I take full responsibility, and will look things over

Great job on this so far Juli!
Det blev på engelska denna gång, av nån slags artighet mot sångerskan. skall mecka med sången, så får vi se vart vi hamnar.
tack allihop för lyssning och synpunkter!