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Demolåtar / Jambrains - Cries of Angels
« skrivet: 25.07.2015, 17:44:49 »
Oftast tar det en hiskelig tid att skriva, spela in och mixa. För en gångs skull flöt det på riktigt bra.
Låten i sig har fått ett bra mottagande men jag har fått ett par kommentarer på mixen som jag är osäker på om de är relevanta eller bara en fråga om personlig smak/lyssning så det vore intressant att höra vad KR säger (man får ju så klart tycka till om annat än mixen även om jag nog känner mig klar med den i övrigt)
CRIES OF ANGELS
V1
Intoxicated strangers
in a bar I do not know
the kind of place where fallen angels
come to hit their all time low
There's a sign behind the counter
it says "leave no stone unturned"
made me smile for just one moment
'cause I did just that and crashed and burned
CHORUS
But now I see
the cries of all my angels
were always drowned by demons whispering
then one by one
my angels all fell silent
until their cries were nigh to nothing
The cries of angels
demons whispering
V2
A drunk, young couple in the corner
none of them more than a teen
I shrugged my shoulders, searched for quarters
and headed off to a slot machine
I put my hand upon the lever
said "let it rock and let it roll"
and just as all the wheels stopped turning
the scotch began to take its toll
CHORUS
SOLO
BREAK
I stumbled through the hallway
tripped and crashed onto the floor
gazed up on a naked light bulb
and I could hear my demons roar
CHORUS * 2
he cries of angels
demons whispering
OUTRO
Intoxicated strangers
in a bar I do not know
Låten i sig har fått ett bra mottagande men jag har fått ett par kommentarer på mixen som jag är osäker på om de är relevanta eller bara en fråga om personlig smak/lyssning så det vore intressant att höra vad KR säger (man får ju så klart tycka till om annat än mixen även om jag nog känner mig klar med den i övrigt)
CRIES OF ANGELS
V1
Intoxicated strangers
in a bar I do not know
the kind of place where fallen angels
come to hit their all time low
There's a sign behind the counter
it says "leave no stone unturned"
made me smile for just one moment
'cause I did just that and crashed and burned
CHORUS
But now I see
the cries of all my angels
were always drowned by demons whispering
then one by one
my angels all fell silent
until their cries were nigh to nothing
The cries of angels
demons whispering
V2
A drunk, young couple in the corner
none of them more than a teen
I shrugged my shoulders, searched for quarters
and headed off to a slot machine
I put my hand upon the lever
said "let it rock and let it roll"
and just as all the wheels stopped turning
the scotch began to take its toll
CHORUS
SOLO
BREAK
I stumbled through the hallway
tripped and crashed onto the floor
gazed up on a naked light bulb
and I could hear my demons roar
CHORUS * 2
he cries of angels
demons whispering
OUTRO
Intoxicated strangers
in a bar I do not know